Thứ Sáu, 24 tháng 6, 2011

Writing task1: Cinema attendance by age group




The line graph shows the percentage of Autralian cinema attendance in 10 years from 1990 to 2010. The graph gives information of 4 groups at diffirent ages which are 14 to 24, 25 to 34, 35 to 49 and over 50 years old.


As you can see, the youngest group is much more than any other groups. The percentage of this group has been very high, always well over 80%. It reached a peak in 1996, about 97%. But from 1998 to 2008. it remained steady at 90% the kept increasing to over 90% in 2010.

The percentage of middle groups are so high, are between 60% to 80%. The percentage of age 25 to 34 group was always higher than the one of 35 to 49 years old group until 2006. from 2006, the percentage of age 25 to34 group dropped dramatically to just over 60% in 2010 but the one of 35 to 49 years old group increased to over 80% in 2010

The oldest group has less percentage than any other group. From 1990 to 1992, the percentage of this group was not as half as the one of the youngest group. Bur from 1992, it kept increasing rapidly from 40% to just over 60% although it decreased slightly by 5% from 55% to 50% between 1998 and 2002

Overall it seems the people who are from 14 to 24 years old prefer going to the theater than the other. But the percentage of the middle age and old people is still increasing quickly. 

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  1. I think you lack of an overview in the introduction. Give an overall trend for all information before you mention the details

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